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Hunting training - short story by =Ravana3k:iconRavana3k:



It was morning on Felarya and the sun was rising. Big and wide clouds were at the sky and the first animals were wandering through the jungles and other parts of the world.  The most predator were still sleeping, only a few were hunting at this time. One of these hunters was already sneaking through the jungle, the gigantic feet touched the ground and even if the big feet had to make some noises; they didn’t.
It wasn’t easy to move as silence as the giantesses did  but she knew how important it was to come closer at her prey without be heard. The long black hair of the gigantic woman was bounded to a ponytail this morning, she didn’t want to get constricted by them.
Suddenly she heard something, it wasn’t very far away from her; somebody was running or walking very fast and the giantesses grinned satisfied so that her white teeth glanced in the sun, she knew the destination of her prey and she was pretty sure that she also knew the kind of her.

Marya  lived now over one year on Felarya and in this time she learned a lot about this world, about his inhabitants and also how she had to hunt her victims. And these noises, the time and the kind of running; it was a neko.
For a few seconds she stopped, thought about her tactic and then she sneaked into the direction where she hoped to find the neko; at one of the smaller lakes where the water was fresh and not much predators were living inside. These lakes were too small for mermaids and other hunters there were just too less prey and so these spots were known as safety water spots but this didn’t mean that land-predators like the giantess didn’t hunt there.

As she came closer, Marya could see the lake and there she was. The neko was kneeing at the border of the sea, drinking something and washing herself, she felt safety and why she shouldn’t?
At this time the most predators were still sleeping but Marya wasn’t. Her chest was strained, she sneaked closer to the neko, she knew that she had to avoid that the neko could see her mirror-picture in the sea and so she was extremely carefully. As she was close enough to catch her she grinned and harrumphed herself.
The neko instantly stopped and turned the head around, just to see a woman of over 70 feet high  grinning down at her and pointing first on her and then on her belly.

“You have a meeting with my stomach my dear … now” Marya said with a deep pleasant voice and maybe the neko would be interested in this gigantic woman, if there wasn’t the fact that she wanted to eat her.

The catlike womanknew that she hadn’t any chance to escape into the forest and so she jumped into the water, tried to swim away. Marya giggled amused as she watched the neko trying to escape.
She made one step forward kneed down and dived her hands into the water. She made a bowl with both hands and led them under the neko, just to raise them a few seconds later. A lot of water was now in the bowl of her hands including the helpless prey, drifting in the hands of her predator.
Marya grinned down as she watched her victim, the neko knew that she couldn’t escape, it was too high for her.

“Ohhh I’m soooo thirsty …” she said grinning and led the hand closer to her mouth.

The cat girl was shouting something but Marya didn’t listen to her, she just led the water flow into her mouth, including the neko  and then she gulped her down with the fresh water.
It tasted very good and for a few seconds Marya had to smile. Usually she would play with her prey, pushing her around in her mouth and everything but today she just wanted to enjoy the feeling of a good filled belly and a fast snack. She nodded satisfied and grinned as she felt the neko struggling in her stomach, she stroked her navel very gently and gave a comfortable sigh, breakfast was safe.


As the giantess reached her home, a big cave which had enough space for living in there, she heard a loud snoring from inside. Marya rolled her eyes and stepped inside as she saw another giantess lying at the ground of the cave, covered by some furs and sleeping.
She was younger than Marya and she had long, blond hair and a very beautiful face. Marya smiled softly as she kneed down and looked into Joras face, how often she wished to gave her a good-morning kiss but this time she had just to stroke over her arms.

“Jora … wake up … it’s time to wake up” she whispered down.

The younger giantess was moving to the side and mumbled something.  “Not yet … just a few minutes … “ but she opened her eyes and looked dizzy up to Marya.

“You should learn to sleep a little less, you’re always sleeping too long. If you aren’t hunting in the early hours you’ll have some problems … in the worst case you won’t find any prey and then you’re hungry again. So stand up and go hunting, young Lady!” she said with a sternly voice.

Jora stood up and sighed a little “Yeah you’re right … I’ll go instantly and hunt something to eat …” and with these words she also walked out of the cave, Marya was just smiling and watching the leaving giantess. She knew it would become late until Jora would return.


A few hours later Jora was cursing and looked around. These damn nekos were still too fast for her! Every time she tried to catch them, they were running or jumping away, hiding themselves in the bushes or attacked her … yes one of those bastards attacked Jora and hit her with her claw. Jora was so shocked that she led the neko fall down and so she could escape.

It was a frustrating hunt today, she had no luck and her last hope was the travel route where she hoped to find some humans, the only prey she was successful before. She tried to use all the hints and lessons, Marya thought her; always sneaking, even if she couldn’t see any prey, it was most time better not to attract someones attention.
Then; always being careful that her prey couldn’t hear, feel, or see her and the last hint; if she was close enough grabbing her prey as fast as possible. The first hint wasn’t very hard for her, Jora was very good in sneaking around but the last two where very difficult. Often Jora had problems to avoid that her prey recognized her and if her victim was alerted, she was often too nervous and every try to grab her prey wasn’t very successful.

This time she was quite sure that she would catch anything and as she reached the trade-route which was used by some humans from time to time, she looked around. There was no sign of any human on the way but she could hear something, not too far away.
Voices! She wanted to cheer up but then she remembered the lessons and began to sneak into the direction, very carefully she sat one foot after the other and sneaked closer to the origin of the noises and then she could see them; two humans and they were standing around a broken cart, it seemed like they were trader.

“Look, I don’t say the stuff is worthless but it is dangerous to stay in an area like this …” one of the two said.

The other just laughed. “We’ll be ruined if we leave them here in the wilderness, how should we make money at the markets of Drinda if we haven’t anything to sell? My family need some food. Of course it is dangerous but soon the other will arrive and then we’ll fix the cart and continue.”

Jora made a grimace and she felt something hard in her mind. These guys had families, they were fathers … she couldn’t eat them. But on the other hand; this was Felarya and she was extremely hungry. She nodded a little, she would catch them and then she would decide what she would do with both, that was a good idea. She sneaked closer, now she made herself a little smaller by squatting and concentrated herself.
Just being fast enough to grab … at three … one … tow … groooooooooowl … three?
She looked down to her stomach who was growling very loud and if this wasn’t bad enough Jora was now instinctive cursing very loud. As she recognized what she did she jumped forward and tried to grab her two victims but as her face went through the bushes they were away and Jora just had a broken cart in her hand.
She sighed deeply, again her stomach was her biggest enemy while she was hunting.
She had to learn to control these damn growling from her insides.
Finally she had to accept one fact; she was still learning and something in her mind said that this day would become very, very long … but this was normal … everybody had to learn and to train before he became a big predator. Jora wasn’t a exception.


And so Felaryas most clumsy giantess was continuing her hunt …
©2008-2009 =Ravana3k
:iconravana3k:

Author's Comments

Just a new short story for training my english grammar and writing skills for the english exam on wednesday.

After little time we see Marya again in action and also Jora ;)

Felarya belongs to :iconkarbo:

the other characters belongs to me

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:icontrh7323:
Ah, the stomach betrays even the best of us

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Chuck Norris doesnt shave; he kicks himself in the face. The only thing that can cut Chuck Norris is Chuck Norris.
:iconkarbo:
haha classic ! XD
:iconravana3k:
Glad you liked it ^^ well that's Jora ... xD
:iconravana3k:
Yeah .. and Jora will always be the poor one ^^
:iconthunderbolt15002000:
Rofl that was hilarious, poor thing. /sympathy

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Just needs a lit-*explode!* *cough*... yep that was right! Now Bring it up to scale on that building over there!
:iconravana3k:
Yeah Jora has always rotten luck with such things
:icono-b-s-i-d-i-a-n:
Perhaps she should fill on fruits a little before going for the live thing o_o

Poor Jora
:icontheunorthadox:
Aww, poor Jora~! :XD: hehe! :3

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You know you wanna..
:toast: :pissed:
GRAB THE TOAST BEFORE HE EATS IT
(Seriously, the toast is clickable) :lmao:
:iconravana3k:
Mh fruits aren't something for a real predator xD

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