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Hunting training

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This day was one of the typical days on Felarya. The sun was shining down to the earth and it was comfortable warm and pleasant, the inhabitants were mostly on the hunt and the smaller creatures on Felarya tried to survive the day without any problems. Some nekos were hunting in the deeper parts of the jungles, at some places where the bigger predators had problems to follow them, human caravans were walking over the “safe” streets into the direction of Negan or one of the many magical gates, it was a typical day for everybody … really for everybody.

The three humans were running for their life, and really the prize for becoming lazy or too slow was their life because to stand still, to fall down or anything else would mean the end.
They all were running through the bushes, no special goal in front of their eyes, only one thing in mind; running! Sweat was covering their faces the hot air made it harder to breathe and some lower branches from some trees were hitting them in their faces, leaving red straps on the skin.
But in this moment pain wasn’t important for them, even if one of them would break his leg he would try to escape from the danger that was behind them and they could hear her coming closer.
The ground was shaking with every step the predator came closer and closer and if they wouldn’t manage to locate a safety spot, it would be useless to run all the time. The predator was bigger, faster and had more energy than they had and another problem; the predator was extremely motivated to continue her hunt.


A reason for this was simple, they were four humans before, one of them, Lura was her name, was now somewhere by the predators, she was alive, they knew it but it was only a question of time how long this would be so. Higgon, he was the leader of the group and he was the boss of the little trade caravan they all led through Felarya, didn’t realize what exactly happened.
Suddenly he heard a loud scream from Laura and then a big hand grabbed down, the fingers enclosed around her body and as they looked up they finally realized that they were in big troubles. Fortunately the hunter seemed to be surprised … yes this predator WAS definitely surprised that she caught somebody and this gave the other enough chances to escape, but what was the prize for this chance? Every moment when he had a chance to breathe he could hear Laura begging, screaming … Felarya was a dangerous and merciless world, yes but the problem was that the most people, Higgon included, realized this only when it was too late.

They would probably die for a little more money they wanted to earn, but for the moment they were alive and they had still a chance, he didn’t want to give up, he didn’t want to accept this fate and so he screamed to the other two and they began to push a little more, taking everything from their bodies, they would need it.
Maybe it was luck, maybe it was fate, maybe it was just some random but as Higgon looked to his right he could see a cave, yes a good damn cave. He shouted and pointed to the entry, the earth didn’t stop shaking, this would become damn close.
They sprinted with all their power to the entry and then, yes finally they reached the cold stone-ground of the cave, stumbled inside it and ran as far into the cave as possible. The air inside the cave was cooler than outside even if the cave wasn’t very big, after a few minutes of walking they reached a dead end … they were captured, but they were also alive for the moment and safe … and outside of the cave the steps came closer.


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This day was one of the typical days on Felarya. The sun was shining down to the earth and it was comfortable warm and pleasant, the inhabitants were mostly on the hunt and the smaller creatures on Felarya tried to survive the day without any problems. Some nekos were hunting in the deeper parts of the jungles, at some places where the bigger predators had problems to follow them, human caravans were walking over the “safe” streets into the direction of Negan or one of the many magical gates, it was a typical day for everybody … really for everybody.

Jora was wandering through the area around the bigger main route which lead from one magical gate to the other. The chance to capture some prey here was very small, especially at this time but the blond giantess wanted to challenge her luck a little and so she began to walk up and down along the forest beside the street.
Since her return of Milana she did what the giantess advised he; she practiced hunting and tried to find her own style of hunting. The first time this didn’t work very good, she was even worse than before and she went often back home with a growling stomach, fortunately Marya shared her prey from time to time with her and so she had something inside her stomach, but it wasn’t a very good feeling to eat something that another person caught her.
To find her own style of hunting was even more difficult,  she tried different kind of hunting; the rampaging style where she started to throw with trees and different at her prey but this was very effective and one day she tried to pull out a dryad of the earth … this was very embarrassing.
The other day she tried the same method like Vivian but as she put down skirt and shirt she was so bashful that she couldn’t grab the human … they were all staring at her and Jora couldn’t understand how Vivian could manage this all! So she had to try something different, but what kind of hunting? It wasn’t easy and as she walked down the street this morning she didn’t had any plans and as she could hear the humans coming closer, well, then everything became a little fast and … chaotic.


She saw the four humans very late and well … they didn’t see to recognize her, they walked directly into her direction. Since her trip into the swamps on the northern parts of Felarya her senses became more sensitive and something inside Jora acted just in this moment, like she was following some old instincts deep inside her that suddenly awaked. She made three big steps to the street and then she jumped forward.
As her naked feet touched the hard ground of the street the earth was trembling and the human didn’t realize what happened, it was the right time, she just had to act fast enough and so she did; her right hand darted forward she could feel how something was touching her palm and the she closed the hand … and the other humans were running.

As Jora raised her hand and she could feel the struggling and shouting from the inside of her hand she wanted to cheer but there were still three humans, she wanted to catch them, she knew that this was important for her, she had to be successful today and so she began to follow them with wide and fast steps.
They were very fast for humans and Jora understood their speed, they knew that this could be their last moments and Jora wanted to win this hunt, the struggling woman inside of her hand gave her enough motivation and power to follow them even after they passed some territory that was harder to pass for her, she knew where they were.
The sun was burning down on her and sweat was covering the big body of the blonde giantesses, also her closed right hand became a little sweaty and she didn’t want to know how warm it would be inside of her closed fist but this wasn’t her problem now, she had to concentrate herself on these humans.

She came closer and closer, the humans became slowly and it wouldn’t take very long and she could just grab them and then, yes, then she would enjoy her first own hunted meal since weeks. Unfortunately everything came a little different than she hoped because the humans founded one of the smaller caves that were placed in the whole country but Jora knew also that they were like a mousetrap, once inside they wouldn’t come out and so they were trapped.
She became more slowly, walked gently to the cave and as she reached the entrance she went down on her knees and looked inside of it with one eye, she couldn’t see anything but she could hear them, she just had to pick them out … no problem … normally.
The problem this time was that the cave was too wide and narrow, she couldn’t stretch her hand completely inside the cave and she wasn’t able to reach the humans. A little sigh came over her lips and she took a grimace, began to sat down in front of the cave and looked thoughtful to the entrance.
She had to wait … or to think about how she could lure them out. She just wanted to start thinking as she felt some struggling inside her right hand … oh yes, there was something, she thought with a big grin … it was lunch time.


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Higgon took a deep breath as they reached the end of the cave. Behind them was a stone made of natural stone, cold and rough, the fresh and colder air inside their “cage” was refreshing and they all had some few moments to relax before they had to react very fast.
The hand of the giantess began to come through the entry of the cave, very slowly but constantly. They all pressed their bodies against the wall behind them but this wasn’t necessary; the big fingers, one finger was as long as they were, didn’t reach them and so the giantess had to give up, at least one good fact today. Higgon closed his eyes as the hand went back, out of the cave and then they stared all to the entry of the cave, the light vanished and one big eye looked inside, it was like from a bad horror movie but this wasn’t a movie where the heroes would definitely survive in the end.
After a few seconds the eye vanished from the entry and they could see some rose legs, the giantess seemed to sit down in front of the cave, and this meant that she decided to wait, great.

“Okay Boss, what now? I mean … we’re in a bad situation …” it was the first time that the second man, John, talked since they met the giantess.
He was the biggest of them all, had a darker skin, tanned through the sun of many different worlds and his short, brown hair was completely wet, Haggon didn’t know because of all the sweat or because it was really a little wet inside the cave. He looked to the entry and he wasn’t very happy about his situation.

“Bad situation? Are you kidding? We’re dead!” the third answered, Lenran was his name and he was the youngest and newest of them all. This was his third trip and Haggon cursed himself for taking him to a world like Felarya.

“Let’s stay calm … panic isn’t helpful guys, maybe she’ll vanish after …” but he couldn’t end the sentence, they all looked now to the entry and they could hear a scream from a female voice and they all knew what would happen now … lunch time for the predator.


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Jora looked down to the woman in her palm and smiled a little. The woman looked a little older, than the most women she met in Felarya before and she had blond hair, wore short clothes because of the heath and looked up to her, trembling. In this moments Jora always felt a little sorry for the humans and sometimes she tried to imagine how she would feel in such a situation, but this was Felarya, she was hungry and well, every human had to know if he really wanted to risk his life by coming to this world. And so she didn’t feel  too bad as she examined the little human very carefully.

Of course she was frightened and now she began to beg for her life, it was always the same and Jora asked herself is she would also be such idealess with her reasons if she would be in a identical situation.
This was the funny aspect of humans and now that she wasn’t anymore one of them she realized this even more; they gave all the same worthless reasons; family, the job, all the goals she had still … there was nothing really personal from her, she only tried to mention how important she was and this made it a lot easier for Jora to open her mouth, raising her up and lowered her slowly down without anymore words.

She didn’t talk often with her prey, she wasn’t that kind of hunter who was torturing his prey or something, she just wanted to eat and as she could feel the kicking feet on her tongue followed by the rest of the body she closed her lips, took the last little light from the woman and led her vanish into the darkness of her mouth.
She waited a few moments, led her stay in her mouth, pushed her a little around, pressed the lips hard on each other so that she couldn’t escape and enjoyed for a moment the good taste which came over her tongue, she missed this so long that it was a little frightened to herself, she really became a true predator since she landed in Felarya.

The woman inside her mouth seemed to be a fighter, she kicked around, yeah she hit her tongue, tried everything to come out but this all made it only better for Jora before she smiled a little and began to gulp her “food” down.
No human was able to resist the power of her muscles and so she was forced deeper into her throat and very slowly she slithered down the slimy and narrow tunnel directly into her stomach, a short way but for the most humans it was an endless journey.
Jora could feel how the little bulge on her throat went deeper and deeper and then she felt a little hard feeling on her stomach as the woman felt down. A sighing came over her lips and she began to lift her shirt she was wearing today and stroke her belly gently. What now followed was something other predator liked very much but for Jora it was still strange.
As she was a human she ate only food that was … well “dead” and couldn’t move and struggling around in her stomach, but humans did all this and the most time they did it very desperate and so this woman.
Jora could feel how she stood up, ran around in her stomach, a very amazing feeling, good and a little strange on the same time, from time to time she seemed to fall down, suddenly something began to push against her stomach walls. In these moments Jora just said there and waited what happened next, it was like a little child watching curious what a pet would do next, but this wasn’t a pet in her stomach, this was food. A short view to the entry of the cave and she grinned a little and went down to look inside the cave.

She could see the rest of the humans, the three men and one of them … was … holding a gun?! Jora reacted a little too late and the bullet hit her in the eye a painful experience.
Of course the bullet was too small to injure her really but the eye was a very sensitive organ and it was like a insect would fly into the eye of a human, it burned and tears began to float down her face, the eye began to become red and she had to close it.
She looked down to the cave and she felt angry, extremely angry. “OKAY! If you want to have trouble, you can have trouble. And for your information; your friend was VERY tasty but you’ll join her soon, I promise!” she shouted inside the cave and rubbed her eye, all the pleasant of eating was forgotten and vanished for the moment and she sat down in front of the cave, just waiting and holding her eye. Damn … she hated guns.


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“What the hell she is doing out there?”  John asked and Lenran was only staring to the exit. Haggon sat at the ground of the floor, the eyes closed until the screams vanished and they couldn’t hear anymore.
“She ate her … what else?” he said with a numb voice, he knew the rules of Felarya and he wasn’t naïve enough to think that this predator wasn’t eating her prey, even if she looked humanlike. “Oh shit! We never had to come to this place! Damn! We’ll all die because of a little extra money!” Lenran began to panicle, Haggon could see this in his face, he was pale, the eyes were widened and his breath became faster and faster.

The old leader was lying down a hand on his shoulder and shook his head.  “We’ll survive, you hear me? We’ll make it, we just need a good plan …” and he looked around. They couldn’t save much of their equipment, the main part was still on the trader street but they could rescue a few bags and now he began to examine them and the second time of the day he had luck.
He put out a pistol, she was very old and in a bad state but maybe good enough to help them out or to kill this creature. He looked into the magazine and then he realized that this all wasn’t as lucky as he hoped, they had just one bullet.

“Okay guys, who is a good shooter?” Haggon asked and looked around. “You don’t want to fire on this creature, want you?” John was asking a little confused but he took the weapon in the same moment and examined her. “Well we have not much choices and maybe it’s enough to injure her hard enough that we are able to flee.” And so they waited, it was hard just to sit there with the knowledge that one of their best friends was dead now or close to be dead.
It was like a eternity until they could hear something, see how the legs in front of the cave began to move, changing their positions and the big eye looked again inside the cave.
This was the final moment, now or never and John shot. The eye vanished and they first wanted to run out but Haggon hold them back as he recognized that the legs in front of the cave didn’t move very much, they failed, they may be hurt her but not hard enough to  come out and to made everything worse the giantess seemed to be very pissed off now.

“Very well … now we’re doomed …” Lenran mumbled and he became even more pale. Haggon didn’t look very enthusiastic but John was now looking thoughtful. “Maybe we have a last chance …” he said and looked now beside. The older leader and the youngster were looking expectant to him and he just raised his shoulder. “Well if she just ate she’ll maybe become tired with time …” he explained and so they had a new hope. A last hope …


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It took a few hours before the eye stopped hurting completely. She could now open it again and looked around, those bastard would pay for this, damn she was extremely angry. As she was a human she still hated weapons, they were something for cowards she always said. And now she would wait until everything was over.
She didn’t know how well fed the humans were but she was stuffed and she had much time. Okay maybe Marya would be a little worried after some time but she wouldn’t leave this place, not yet.
As hard as it sounded, one time they would begin to starve and then they would beg for a quick end, but Jora didn’t want to wait so long, she knew that humans could live many days without eating and she didn’t know if they had supplies in this cave. She had just to wait, even if this was very boring and beside this her stomach began to work now and she felt dizzy.
As she was a human she never realized how tired you can be after a good meal but now as her stomach began to growl and gurgle she knew that it could be very much tired. She yawned loudly and looked down to the cave, a little sleep would be wonderful now and … yeah and now she was smiling.
She didn’t know why but exactly in this moment something crawled up into her head, a idea that was nearby brilliant and the smile changed to a big grin. Yeah she would be very successful, but not yet in this moment … later. She yawned again. And laid down in front of the cave, blockading the exit as good as it was possible and closed her eyes. Time for a … nap.


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Inside the cave they could hear the loud yawn and everybody was looking on John and grinning wide. “You was right!” Lenran whispered now and they could see how the giantess was lying down on the floor until a leg covered the entry of the cave.
They all looked to the exit, they knew they could made it, they were never so close to their escape than now, nut Haggon was still looking thoughtful. “I don’t know if this is really good … look how close the leg is one the cave, if we really want to escape we have to climb up on her and this could wake her up …”
“I don’t think that she will wake up. I know how deep a good after-meal nap can be …” John said with a deep sighing and then he looked back to Haggon “and we have no other choice.
We have no food and water, we can’t stay here for days. If we have one chance than this, even if there is a big risk, we have to try it. If we don’t do it, we’re done … so what do you say?” and he looked to the older and also to Lenran, the youngster was nodding heavily, he just wanted to escape as fast as possible. Haggon didn’t look very convinced but he nodded too and so they would risk their life for the only chance of freedom.

As they came closer to the exit of the cave they could hear a loud snore, the giantess seemed to sleep really deep, with this noise she wasn’t able to hear them.
They came closer, looked around the fleshy wall that was blocking their escaping route and now they could see that her hips were lying in front of the cave, covered by a skirt made of cloth. John was the first who climbed up the clothing very carefully he began to pull himself up, tried to avoid fast movements so that the giantess wouldn’t awake and he seemed to be successful.
As he reached the “surface” he stood directly at the side of her hips, on his left a long leg on his right the stomach, two breasts as big as mountains and a peacefully face of a sleeping, blond young woman.
John asked himself why such a beautiful Lady was doing such cruel things but he wouldn’t ask her. He looked around, there were two alternatives, to jup down between her legs and to crawl up on the other side or to sneak over the belly and down to the other side.

It wasn’t easy, both was risky but if they wouldn’t always climb up and down she would maybe awake … as the other two climbed up he pointed them that they should follow him.
He began to walk closer to the belly, very carefully and stepped on the soft and warm skin, it was a strange and bizarre feeling, how the ground wasn’t hard and didn’t give in but it was able and if they would just hurry a little more they could reach the other side.
From time to time the stomach was growling, gave strange noises from the inside and John felt sick as he heard this because he knew why the stomach was making such noises, the giantess was stuffed and the stomach satisfied, and the three humans had to listen to this satisfaction three times before the stomach was again silent.
John was half over the stomach as he stopped and looked over his shoulder, Lenran was still staying close to the belly button and stared to the two big breasts covered by  a bustier … god damn, did the boy never saw breasts?!  
“Lenran! Come on!” he whispered beside and the youngster nodded, stepped forward but without looking forward and then he felt down as the surface was suddenly shaking and they could hear a voice … or better said; they could hear her giggling.
“Do you like what you see? I hope so … oh and yeah … gotcha!” and then two hand suddenly appeared and everything became dark around John.


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It was hard not to open the eyes and it was even harder to avoid a giggling as she felt the three humans walking over her belly. All the time she had to press the teeth against each other, they were tickling her extremely but everything worked as she planned.
They felt safe, they tried to use their only chance and they didn’t realize that this was a trap. A trap that Jora created on her own and she felt very good. As she felt them the first time she opened one eye a little, watched them and they didn’t recognize it, they just wanted to be silent and so they were blind for small details. As she could see the boy watching her breasts she wanted to laugh but she resisted and waited, waited until they all were far enough away from the border of her belly and then she suddenly lowered her belly a little and began to giggle with all her power.

She had them, they couldn’t escape, if they would try she would play a little more with the muscles of her belly and they wouldn’t be able to make any more step but Jora also didn’t want to risk anything and so she raised both hands and grabbed the three humans as fast as possible, gotcha! She didn’t know when she felt so good the last time, now she would enjoy the meal.
She opened the right hand where Haggon and Lenran were inside and she gave them a sweet smile before she licked demonstrative over her lips, who should be the first? The old guy or the young boy?

It was a little hard to decide and then she grinned more and more, why not both at the same time? She never caught more than one prey and so she could enjoy this new experience.
The boy was sobbing and crying, he stumbled something but Jora didn’t listen, they shot at her and so she wouldn’t feel any mercy, the old man was silent, it seemed like he accepted his fate and as she took them both with one movement inside her mouth and closed her lips, she smiled.
The taste, the feeling, it was indescribable, Jora never had the taste of two humans at the same time on her tongue and she gave a satisfied sighing from her deep before she began to push the two around in her mouth, no mercy, not a little. The youngster was pressed against the roof of her mouth while the older was forced to lay under her tongue, Jora closed her eyes, relaxed more and more while she was moving them around, led the surface of her wet tongue slither over their bodies, gave them no illusion of freedom before she finally decided to be nice and she gulped first the old one down, then the youngster, one very fast after the other and it WAS definitely a kick of taste and experience that led her body tremble with excitement. As she patted her stomach she wanted to lay down before she remembered the fact that there was still one … well then she would now take care of him.


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It was hot, very hot and it was also very dark. John wasn’t able to see anything and he couldn’t also hear anything outside of the hand. Everything was over now, they loosed and the prize of the winner was their life. As the first sunshine came through the closed fingers he knew it was time to face the winner of this bizarre hunt.
He looked into the smiling face of the blonde giantess. How old was she? She didn’t look very old, younger than John was and she had something childish in her eyes, but there was also something extremely dangerous. Her rose lips were formed to a smile and for a short moments she lifted them to present him some white teeth and a little of the wet tongue.
She didn’t speak to him as she lowered him close to her mouth, he was forced to watch the tongue licking over her lips and as he was teased by her, the tongue covered his upper body and his whole face with saliva , the thick liquid began to soak down into his clothes, they became heavier and it wasn’t a very comfortable feeling. The lips now opened completely, gave him a look into her mouth, the waiting throat with the uvula, waiting like a guard who was protecting the way down into her throat.
The flesh of her mouth, the rest of the white teeth and wherever he looked everything was covered by saliva, lines of the liquid were hanging from the tongue to the mouth-roof and between the teeth. He was lowered closer to the tongue until his body felt the whole wet underground of the slimy muscle and then the last sunlight vanished as the lips closed behind him and John was a little thankful that he didn’t have to see what now would happen.

The tongue was forcing him instantly very strong into the soft inside of Joras left cheek, his face was pushed inside the fleshy and soft walls  before he felt a little down as the tongue released him for a few seconds but then she was lifting him up again, pressed him against the harder roof of the mouth, his back was pressed against it and it was a painful experience, the tongue was stroking over his whole, wet body and the smell of the saliva was the only thing that filled his nose.
The suddenly the tongue led him fall a little and pushed him to the ground the directly opposite where he was before.
Everything there was soft, moving and especially wet because where he was all the saliva was collected and it was like he was in a lake of the liquid. The playing continued, he was forced around, from time to time he nearby slammed against some teeth but the tongue moved him in the right way and so he wasn’t harmed, but he also knew that the giantess just wanted to keep him alive for this last trip that was coming now.
Without any warning the tongue was rising and he slithered down into the throat, like a slide he passed the uvula and was pressed into the narrow and wet tunnel.

Maybe he was glad that he couldn’t see the color and everything else of the pink tunnel he was forced down.
He slithered deeper and deeper, he lost every orientation and so it wasn’t able for him to say where exactly he was, only as he heard a loud booming noise in the far he knew that he passed the heart and then suddenly the tunnel became wide and he felt down with a smacking noise, directly on a ground of moving, fleshy meat.

As he reached the stomach he knew where he was. He couldn’t see anything, he was blind, just the noises of the stomach, the gurgling, the blubbering and … breathing.
“Lenran? Haggon?” he was shouting, he couldn’t hear his own voice very good because of all the noise around him. “We’re here:” the silent voice of the old man was to hear. Haggon was sitting at the moving ground, leaned on a pulsing wall of the stomach.
“Where is Lenran?” John asked and tried to hear something. “Unconscious … was too much for the boy.” The old man said and then they were interrupted by a loud growling. John nodded a little, he wanted to say anything to his old companion but he didn’t know what.
Instead he began to walk around, trying to find something like an exit at the ground but it was useless and Haggon knew this too, that was the reason for his calmness, he accepted what would come.
Suddenly they were catapulted through the stomach as the whole organ began to shake and tremble as the young giantess was patting her full stomach and it seemed to be a little eternity before a loud and continuing growling was saying them that the time was over.
Now a predator would be stuffed a little more and they gave their lives … just for a little extra money.


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Jora smiled dizzy and patted her stomach. She felt tired, the woman was stuffing her very much but three humans at the same time? This was really much. A satisfied feeling came over her body, after all these unlucky days she had her first own success and she made everything Malina told her; she used her own tactic. She was quite sure that she would continue this kind of hunting, she just had to think more than only acting.
But for now, she decided with a deep yawn, it was time for a real nap. The three humans inside her stomach were surprisingly calm and so she was a little disappointed but finally she would be full and she could Marya tell now from her successful hunt. She closed her eyes, lied down and smacked a little. This was a really good day …
Here is my new short story "Hunting training". As you maybe recognize I'm using a new kind of story telling, a switching of different Point of Views, let me know if you like it :)

This story is also the contest prize of :iconkarbo: I hope you like it my friend, I tried to give my best :hug:

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Jora belongs to me
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Marius-the-Mage's avatar
Outstanding story. I loved it. Really well done!